So A Neat Comic

Thank you so much for all your feedback, although, I am going to clarify one thing now that I actually remember it (I had prepared to write it earlier, but never got around to posting it) the comic shifts around to different members of different crews in the fleet, currently I have a grand total of a possible 2490 editions. I was sort of wondering about the speech bubbles, but I couldn't think of a way to do them without color coding them as I can't find a way to make normal speech bubbles without making them look absolutely horrendous  , but it was good to know that they were a bit much. Although since I can't really make them well the 'normal way' I can make them anything else, I'll try some things next edition and I'll see what you think on about some prerelease frames. Something funny: The 3 bubbles in the second frame (with Yuriko walking) are actually covering up something that took me longer than anything else in that scene  . Next one is about an ODST.

I'm just gonna give ya' an abridged version of how I was sort of trying to make this play out: In the title the name of this edition is 'Flashback', implying that some sort of flashback will happen, although I understand this may have been hard to completely understand as looking back that font isn't the kind to be made that small. But aside from that, the 'main character' is standing next to the holo tank (not everyone would get this, I know, but for future reference until it is said in the comic, a holo tank is where a ship's AI data chip is placed. Also, since some people might be confused with a brand new universe and knowing I it would make the comic easily 5x larger plus finding props and character models would be a pain and to my knowledge no one here can make models suitable for anything other than Minecraft, but I decided to use the Halo Universe for the very high amount of props from Halo at my disposal. Still, anyways, when Yuriko B820 (Spartans IIs and IIIs are referred to by their first name/nickname and/or 'their number' which is their candidate number) is talking with Ori (the ship's AI) on the bridge, Yuriko tells Ori that she "hasn't looked out that viewport since her team died," bluntly implying that it is going to be Yuriko's flashback if the reader picked up on the flashback earlier. When Ori calls a shipwide-battlestations call because, they were going to fight some rebels (Insurrectionists, this happens during the first stages of the Human-Covenant War because needle rifle), Yuriko requests a private pelican to presumably drop in a much more dangerous area, and on her way, she remembers more about her old team then like most people who are grieving she wonders what she could have done differently (although they died nearly a while ago and she is a Spartan, but during training she formed a bond with the others, which also made their combat effectiveness better, leading to all of them being put in the same team (Iota Squad). After walking to the hangar deck (the presence of Master Chief Petty Officer of The Navy John S117 is for comical reasons and was placed on the set before I even thought of the comic, but later during shooting I forgot to remove him and decided "eh" and didn't in the initial hangar screenshot but then I did later in the second hangar shot), she experiences the flash back. The team had just dropped onto a presumably hostile planet, but this being Yuriko's first real drop (as implied in her voiceover in orange background like her speech earlier) she vomited while the rest kept cover, but when the-rocket-launcher-guy was headshotted by a sniper, using a needle rifle (this morning I went on a spree getting more props, making actually showing a sniper feasible this time) where he falls dead and Yuriko talks about his death rattle while flashback her performs a counter-sniping maneuver, killing the sniper. But then Chrissina is shot and killed by another sniper (I couldn't draw a needle due to perspective reasons) and then Yuriko takes cover behind her drop pod, and exposes a whole heap of snipers ready to blow her brains out with bright pink doom. Yuriko then realizes that she doesn't remember how she escaped (in the next edition this is explained a bit more). The flashback ends and she is standing in the hangar, where she doesn't remember how she arrived on this ship (again, explained more in next comic). Next comic is an ODST.