Tau Infantry
Posts : 517 Join date : 2012-01-16 Age : 25 Location : Ancapistan
| Subject: Titusland Confederacy Sun Sep 09, 2012 9:57 pm | |
| Azul! 'Hello!' See, you've already started learning Talossan! Welcome to the Trite Hotel here on beautiful New Pratt! We are sure you'll enjoy your stay here in the Titusland Confederacy, but before you can take advantage of our many amenities, including the ONLY aerobatics facility in the galaxy, you must learn the basics of our culture, lest you offend a local resident and get flown at mach 8 backwards while upside down and spinning. First, the basics of our history: The Titusland Confederacy was originally founded as the Republic of Titusland, encompassing a tiny patch of land (comprising a lake, a house, and one and a half acres of land) on a small peninsula known as Florida. For nearly fifty years, we fought for recognition of our existence by the United States, and eventually won with the help of the Kingdom of Talossa (hence Talossan being our official diplomatic language.) Nearly two hundred years later, they had succeeded in conquering the entire eastern third of the United States and, to their north, Canada. Many thousands of years later, the Titusland Confederacy was the first nation to escape from their home planet, on the brink of extinction, using three of the most advanced craft of the period, made right there in the Republic of Titusland. Once they succeeded in finding a habitable planet to settle on, they built a city that would remain the second most advanced in the galaxy for another thousand years. Once that galaxy was destroyed in a collision with another, we found a new galaxy cluster to settle in, bringing most other societies with us. And here we are. UNDER CONSTRUCTION
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Ivan2006 General
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2012-05-08 Age : 26 Location : The Dungeon.
| Subject: Re: Titusland Confederacy Mon Sep 10, 2012 7:50 am | |
| Small tip: more numbers, know less about earth and generally be more accurate on your current state. | |
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The Schmetterling DEV
Posts : 3123 Join date : 2011-08-31 Location : I'm a butterfly.
| Subject: Re: Titusland Confederacy Mon Sep 10, 2012 8:08 am | |
| - Surp. Grm. Ivan Kintobor wrote:
- Small tip:
more numbers, know less about earth and generally be more accurate on your current state. I'd say less numbers, more stats. His section about the Earth is fine, he abandoned it. There does need to be more on the current state of the Republic though. | |
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Ivan2006 General
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2012-05-08 Age : 26 Location : The Dungeon.
| Subject: Re: Titusland Confederacy Mon Sep 10, 2012 8:14 am | |
| - The Schmetterling wrote:
- Surp. Grm. Ivan Kintobor wrote:
- Small tip:
more numbers, know less about earth and generally be more accurate on your current state. I'd say less numbers, more stats. His section about the Earth is fine, he abandoned it. There does need to be more on the current state of the Republic though. How about the following: Forget numbers having to do with earth, the rules say you mustn´t know where earth is so you propably don´t know the exact year Titusland was formed. Add the numbers in information about your current state. If you don´t know what would be interesting about your state, look what other factions wrote. | |
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Tiel+ Lord/Lady Rear Admiral 1st
Posts : 5497 Join date : 2012-02-20 Age : 27 Location : AFK
| Subject: Re: Titusland Confederacy Mon Sep 10, 2012 8:15 am | |
| Fenway says Earth should be avoided in lore at all costs. Taking over an entire nation is OP. | |
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Caramell Sergeant
Posts : 955 Join date : 2012-06-20 Age : 26 Location : Neo Seoul
| Subject: Re: Titusland Confederacy Mon Sep 10, 2012 9:49 am | |
| Technotronics Industries wishes to ally the Titusland Confederacy. | |
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Tau Infantry
Posts : 517 Join date : 2012-01-16 Age : 25 Location : Ancapistan
| Subject: Re: Titusland Confederacy Mon Sep 10, 2012 10:08 am | |
| - Strategion Daynel wrote:
- Technotronics Industries wishes to ally the Titusland Confederacy.
Accepted. | |
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